Comments on: Which one of these do you prefer?

By: Nexxjordan23

Nexxjordan23 — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 14:12:59 +0000

The first one is one of the best raps i’ve seen typed here in a long time. 10/10

The second one didn’t flow as well, but you had some good lines in it. I love this line: "With a confused face asking Y like the chromosome you missing". That was seriously one of the best punchlines i ever heard. But the overall rap wasn’t as good as the second one because you had a lot of uneven bars. 7.5/10.

RHH 2: I can appreciate punchline and battle rappers. But socially conscious raps are much better in my opinion. Some of my favorite conscious songs are:

Thieves in the Night – Blackstar
Respiration – Blackstar
Mathematics – Mos Def
Changes – 2pac
Whatever – Brother Ali
Smithereenz – El-P
Clones – The Roots
*Guarantees – Atmosphere* ******BEST ONE*******
Git Up, Git Out – Outkast
My Philosophy – KRS-1
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You should repost this at around 7 o’clock. You’ll get a lot of better answers

By: Dan L

Dan L — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 13:41:59 +0000

they’re both good, but neither is great. seems like your flow gets awkward at times, you got some really long bars and then some short ones, especially in the first one. i would go with the 2nd one as better, especially since you smash it at the end.
i like both battle and conscious, but prefer more like… spoken word rap i guess. if that makes sense.
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By: `[Hip-Hop Addict]`

`[Hip-Hop Addict]` — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 13:33:59 +0000

I feel the 1st one a little bit more than the 2nd. Both are good. Props to you my man.
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By: My name is...

My name is... — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 13:22:59 +0000

I like The First One. Better Lyrics. id give it a 7.5, and the second one a 7.
RHH2: I like Socially Concious raps more, and i like battle too.
For my favorites (rappers, albums, producers) check my profile
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By: naughty

naughty — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 12:38:59 +0000

both are realy good which ever
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By: Double A

Double A — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 12:12:59 +0000

for the battle rap its suppose to be dissing on there clothes

like the methapors.

help m out

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090422102148AA3JgPI
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By: kelli a

kelli a — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 11:47:59 +0000

This is hard. It's hard to compare because they are different types of rhymes but they both are very visual, so I'll go with the first one because it paints a better picture to me.
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