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Comments on dancing life away poem?
So, you think you can dance?
Do you twirl on your toes
over graves of lost souls
or dance the last tango
through AIDS lines in Congo
maybe shuffle ball change
on the sick and deranged
does your big booty shake
like ruins in earthquake
perhaps dance the soft shoe
for those paying past due
a quick step or fox trot
so you don’t have a thought
arch your back, hold head high
on life’s woes take a bye
eyes right, you never glance
so you think you can dance
I love the rhythm and the ironic, grim humor. My specialties are the two schlep, and the tan went.
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October 25th, 2009
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We have to dance, ma.
We would die of awe if we didn’t.
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I know you don;t like to rhyme, but I thought this one was great.I got the message.
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I dance but I have to glance when I dare.
Nice one!
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i dance for no one
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Nice!!! I dance to the beat of a different drummer though. I think most poets do…
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The only way to stay sane.
good 6 beat
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This poem swings.
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I choose to dance, Ma
I choose to laugh
I choose to love
I choose to enjoy life
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I love the rhythm and the ironic, grim humor. My specialties are the two schlep, and the tan went.
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I think what we have to realize is that we are all in the Dance, for all time and in all places. What you have done in this good poem is to remind us that we have partners, the Dance is not a solo! Well done, Ma!
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Step into my arms and we can waltz across Texas.
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I guess we all have to dance.
nfd♥
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One of your best!
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I tried to twist out of answering
but you shang a langed my
Toes..
Fun Fun Fun..
write on
Ma…
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my butt is not big, well I never! … personally I hope the muses dance on my grave so I can look up their dresses … I perverted that way.
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